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    dots Submission Name: ~Childhood Memory ~dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 358
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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       memory from my past Thoughts Anyone?


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    dots~Childhood Memory ~dots
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    At night I lay in bed listening to the wind hitting the side of the house. Just waiting to for me to fall asleep. Hour past just waiting to fall asleep, I look at the clock it say 3:30 am She going to be home soon. The aunt is going to be drunk. She going to be here soon. As the thought keeps going thou my mind I hear the door open and hit the wall as she comes in. she start yelling. I say where in at. My bedroom door flew open. She come in I can smell the beer coming off of her. She is yelling at me. She say ~ Why the hell are u in bed?~ I could not respond. I wanted to but I was froze. She got even more madder. She Grab my arm and throw me out of my bed. Then She said ~ I Just thought of a way to punish you. You have been bad. You ruin my relationship with my husband and my family!~ I was only 6 years old. She walks away and went into the bathroom. She turn on the hot water and let the tub full up. She came back grab me by my long blond hair. She draw me in to the bathroom And throw me into the bath tub pain shot Thur my body from the hot water. she shove me under the water i could not breathe. Wanting to go up to get some air but she just hold me by my neck. She was choking me under the water. she was angry. I soon to go in and out of my mind. desperately wanting some help, Air but no one was there but her and me.

    Going in and out as I see her face, Her anger goes away. Her grip goes loosing up and she let me go. I jump up out of the water gasping for air. Looking at my aunt who is in shocked get up from her knees and walk away.... Sweet dreams turn into a nightmare.




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