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    dots Submission Name: The Monster in Medots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsThe Monster in Medots
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    How easy, how simple it could be
    if I chose to just let go.
    That beast, he lurks just beneath the surface;
    he begs for a reason to devour us whole.
    But if I let him go, I lose myself.
    Him and I, me and him- we're too different.

    How long must I endure it?
    I am a cliff, holding back the tide.
    He is the wind and the water, calling me to freedom
    wearing me down little by little, day by day.
    I feel the rush, spill the blood. Exalt.
    Me and him, him and I... We're not so different, after all.




    Submitted on 2013-04-27 00:43:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :) I like your work
    | Posted on 2013-10-12 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      oh I totally relate to this. It captures the struggle nicely with beautiful imagery. keep up the good work. :)
    | Posted on 2013-05-05 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
      there is always another side to us..the Dr. Jekyll to our Mr. Hyde so to speak..they are always there, hidden within us and at times yearning to be free..the choice is up to us right if we'll let it consume us or not..nice :)
    | Posted on 2013-04-30 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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