Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Too Soondots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 977
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 209



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsToo Soondots
    -------------------------------------------


    A shadow cast across a child's grave
    dried leaves rustle in the mourning wind.
    A broken family wears black.
    Only the ground,
    covered in a petaled blanket,
    rejoices.




    Submitted on 2013-04-27 00:50:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Only the ground rejoices! Oh my, that says it all, doesn't it.
    Very effective, brief, cuttingly crisp imagery. Than you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-05-16 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    197289

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Cover written by saartha
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Redemption written by poetotoe
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Carry written by saartha
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    to Be like written by KeeperOfLight
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Love written by saartha
    Shi written by ShyOne

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry