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    dots Submission Name: Too Soondots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsToo Soondots
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    A shadow cast across a child's grave
    dried leaves rustle in the mourning wind.
    A broken family wears black.
    Only the ground,
    covered in a petaled blanket,
    rejoices.




    Submitted on 2013-04-27 00:50:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Only the ground rejoices! Oh my, that says it all, doesn't it.
    Very effective, brief, cuttingly crisp imagery. Than you for sharing.
    | Posted on 2013-05-16 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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