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    dots Submission Name: Soul- Scouringdots

    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSoul- Scouringdots

    Perhaps the reason why I hesitate to scry my soul
    Is because I fear what I might see
    These pages hold my heart and mind,
    Scooped from within and smeared across paper
    Left to fester in the dark.

    Surely what returns is an abomination.
    A sick sort of grotesque fascination is all I expect.
    But what arrives
    while it is indeed abominable
    Holds its own sort of magnificence.

    Behold my might, held secret from the world!
    (Don't) Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair!
    What I have created
    This monstrosity, a crime against nature
    Albeit a beautiful one
    Must never bee seen.

    I lock my soul away in a paper prison.

    Maybe that's why I feel so alone.

    Submitted on 2013-04-27 00:51:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I would like to take a minute and thank you for writing down in words what torments my heart, but can never be said. I could never find the words. So thank you.
    | Posted on 2013-05-03 00:00:00 | by JosephBell | [ Reply to This ]

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