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    dots Submission Name: Lust Part I - Lucifel's Monologuedots
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    Author: Akiko Hime
    ASL Info:    23/F/Romania
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 25/7/11
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsLust Part I - Lucifel's Monologuedots
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    Beyond all reasons that you may doubt,
    That hope stil lingers in your heart...
    You think that Life was taken,
    Listen close, your feelings show you are mistaken ...

    Lingering through the dark,
    Weeping silently, slowly letting out your wrath...
    Burning feeling from inside,
    Banish all the memories from my mind...

    "Once again I'm fading, as the dawn is braking,
    All the shards that make it whole
    Crave for the realising of this soul...
    Crimson as the blood unleashed -
    Is the sky representing my wish

    I miss the breath of Life - a gentle whisper in the morning light
    I crave for the touch of Love - a puzzle even for the world above
    I wish for sight beyond the DReam - a doorway to lands within
    I desire certainty in Destiny - and so I believe in your promise fearfully."

    I look upon you with a lust
    You gaze back at me reasured with trust;
    I'll hold you tight, as you're loosing life,
    So cold in my arms, oblivious to my thoughts .




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