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why we write


Author: CNPerry
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why we write



to toil in one's own mind
to mine the ore that is soul
inevitably yields most precious of gems
most blackest of coals




Submitted on 2013-04-27 23:39:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  A more accurate metaphor for writing is hard to come by. I really connected with this, oftentimes pondering on the reason behind writing as I do.
| Posted on 2013-04-29 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]


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