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    dots Submission Name: ~Childhood Memory~ PT2dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 332
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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       Thoyght i had when I was a child about 6


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    dots~Childhood Memory~ PT2dots
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    As a little girl, I have seen the whole world between Life, death, Hate, love. Is there a better world then this?

    Death is written all over the world like it a piece of paper that been tear up and thrown around. So many hateful people that kill one another.

    The people that loves the world and all that shit about caring about the environment is fading into hateful words. All the loves fades away into nothing

    Sometime Love in means all different things. Love can mean A man who loves to hurt little girls And show them how mean and cruel men are. Men are the most cruel humans, and how selfish the are. A innocent girl no longer feels like a child anymore because she was used and so many way. She look at the world with fears something going to happen again.

    The love that a mother and father have for the child no longer exits. Selling their children for sex to get money to feed them self.

    The world has become the most selfish this in the world that no one to turn to but GOD. Praying to GOD to end all this nightmares.

    A child should never known about the Cruel world at the age 5.

    A young Child Should never have fear about the world, Soon they will have panic attack.. Soon lead to self harm that lead to death....

    A Little Child Should never know Love that a cruel men has for them or What death is really like or how Parent only think of them self.

    God will always be there for the innocent child< He would always love Innocent child with care not lust..


    A little child should only know her love for TOYYY and candys AND her selfless parent....




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