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    dots Submission Name: Life as a bipolar dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsLife as a bipolar dots
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    Life started falling apart in 9th grade
    losing all my friends, walking down those halls alone.
    everyone is laughing, Happy but you.
    knowing suicide the only way to end everything
    life is harder when we have those emotions that changes you
    every-time You turn around You have a new emotion affecting You.
    They all ask? why do you feel this way? OR
    They tell you?
    Stop making yourself feel this way only you can change how You feels?
    Only if they knew how hard things are or how hard it is to live life.




    Submitted on 2013-05-03 08:53:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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