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    dots Submission Name: Feeling left out dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 538
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    Description:
       Just venting


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    dotsFeeling left out dots
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    Every-time I turn around something always happens.
    I am a failure.
    Feelings that never away.
    The signs of them leaving YOU.
    And you Just know it going to happens
    They say it will never happen but they keep lying to me
    I'm just never good enough for anyone
    no one seem to understand me
    everything is my fault

    I need to learn just to let Things go
    like myself soon i'll be gone
    No one would care or notice




    Submitted on 2013-05-03 08:58:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      We all feel left out or unloved at some point. Just remember, there's always someone who cares. This was good, but it pains me to know that this is how you're feeling. I hope you find peace, but thank you for sharing this :)
    | Posted on 2013-05-07 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]


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