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    dots Submission Name: Restless Nightmare dots
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    Author: angelagresham19
    ASL Info:    18-Female Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 66/32/42
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    dotsRestless Nightmare dots
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    Restless sleeps become more often for a while wake up in a nightmares every night around 3 am
    worried something going to happen. never ending dreams about losing him and being
    Family want me to break up with him that no one would understand what I am going though
    but I would never break up with him wanting to make everyone one happy but it hard to go both
    they say Oh, He cheating on you and stuff like that ways.
    Only if they knew how much he makes me soo happy like
    all the pain goes away...




    Submitted on 2013-05-03 09:10:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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