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    dots Submission Name: I destroyed myself dots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI destroyed myself dots
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    So I began to destroy myself
    I began to kill the memories
    One by one
    One cut at a time
    I destroyed each one that was linked to you
    I destroyed myself
    Because I wasn't going to give you the pleasure of doing it.




    Submitted on 2013-05-03 12:41:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes it feels like the only pain you can really control is the physical kind. Sometimes you just don't feel at all, and want to make sure you still can. But there are other ways. Stay strong, and believe. There are people out there who care :)
    | Posted on 2013-05-05 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]
      Each moment we waste on those who don't care is another thought of bloodied wrists. You watch the world shrink slowly away from all the sarcasm, tears, and pain. And you realize as you make the final plunge, that he was never the one. That all of this was a horrible mistake and that it shouldn't have had to been yours to make. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Stay strong.
    | Posted on 2013-05-03 00:00:00 | by JosephBell | [ Reply to This ]


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