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    dots Submission Name: Heartless Loverdots
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    Author: DarkAngel101
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotsHeartless Loverdots
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    How about I let you fuck me for a night?
    Then afterwards I can slice and dice
    How about I let you fuck another girl?
    Then afterwards I can take your soul
    I am a heartless lover who is filled with hate
    Because you took the thing so precious to me
    You made me a whore and love every man in a heart beat
    So let me tie you to the bed
    Let me kiss every inch of you
    Let me take you boxers off and gag you
    Let me pour hot candle wax down your chest
    Let me ride you until you feel raw
    Afterwards I can clean you and suck your little meat
    I can play with balls
    I want you to feel pleasure before I finish you off
    After the clean there is another surprise for you
    Let me take the knife from beneath the mattress
    Let me run the knife down your chest and see a fine line of blood
    I will lick it the first time before playing with your little mushroom with the tip of the knife
    I want you to watch everything I do and not say a word
    Don't you remember you said those words to me?
    I am tired of seeing your tears
    So I cut off your manhood in response
    To end your pain filled death I stab you in the heart and pull it out of your chest
    I play in your blood as I eat bits and pieces of your heart
    I am a heartless lover




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