I took from this poem, as a person dying, going to hell, and being torn apart by the devil. If this was how it was supposed to be portrayed, I thought the lines at the end were fittingly melodramatic. Its like, old fashioned, in a newly thought of sort of way. Like the first lines tell a lot of the psychology of a suicide victim, but the rest displays the sinning soul thrown into hell. Is that what you were getting at? Dunno, just a thought, nicely written, I see the other side everyone else is speaking of as well. Very intense.