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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Dear soldier,
    I am calling you.
    I want to be a voice that makes you listen
    to your heart
    each time you look around.
    I will try to whisper words of confidence
    in your ear.
    “Fight for your HEART” is a line that should be stuck to your tongue.
    You, my soldier, are in the eyes of
    the people you protect.
    Whatever the reason
    you keep chained around your neck,

    I won’t forget the weight of your vow.




    Submitted on 2013-05-03 21:24:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      title maybe "Dear Soldier"?
    | Posted on 2014-09-30 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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