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    dots Submission Name: Feelingsdots
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    Author: DarkSerenity
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Alone
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    Description:
       I have major love life issues


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    dotsFeelingsdots
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    Feelings

    It's like I'm falling when I see him
    He snatched my heart away when I laid eyes on him
    His cocky like demeanor that he portrays sometimes
    His shyness
    The 20 second conversations I have with him
    His blue eyes
    Dirty blonde hair
    His face
    Just the way he is
    Doesn't help the way I feel
    He's oblivious to this all
    I feel so helpless
    Like he doesn't even know I exist
    Why do I have to be afraid to tell him
    Scared he will get weirded out
    Scared he won't want to see me anymore
    Scared he won't feel the same
    He's all I think about anymore
    When he talks to other girls I grow jealous
    When I'm talking to him and I get interrupted by someone I get mad
    When he doesn't return my smile I feel lonely
    When he doesn't return my wave I want to hide
    Fighting these feelings
    Always thinking about him
    I fallen for him
    To hard
    And know I know
    I love him




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