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    dots Submission Name: my faith restored. dots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsmy faith restored. dots
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    Walking by all alone,
    A grim expression, a lost soul
    When I look up, a stranger’s smile
    So genuine, sincerity
    Are my eyes deceiving me?
    A quick gaze upon my arms.
    Self inflected wounds, full of scars.
    A hint of worry upon his eyes
    Could he really care for a lost cause?
    My pace got faster, to pass him by
    His hand reached
    I closed my eyes
    He hugged me tight
    Perhaps a second…
    Smiled again, before departing
    And never once did we exchange
    Words.
    But with his kindness
    My faith was restored.




    Submitted on 2013-05-06 16:23:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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