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    dots Submission Name: Sparkle Tearsdots
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    Author: Akiko Hime
    ASL Info:    23/F/Romania
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 25/7/11
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Twinkle Twinkle faithful tears
    Shining through my dreaded fears,
    Words have scarred my fragile thoughts -
    Whispers running through my veins like clots.

    Twinkle Twinkle scattered scarres
    Marking crimson my hated dreams,
    Battles endless in my wreched past -
    All I had has turned to dust.

    Twinkle Twinkle lost wants
    Rushed within my heart's shards,
    Whishes try to reach the stars -
    Crushed under cold steel bars.

    Twinkle Twinkle beloved tears
    Shining light upon my years,
    Falling feelings make life light -
    Coloring sight with damned might.




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      I'm so sorry you feel this way. It kind of makes me want to hug you, but that would probably be weird if it were even feasible, because we don't know each other and stuff haha.

    Anyway, I really like when people play off nursery rhymes with their poetry, particularly when writing about something that's rather sad. It seems like a good way to keep some level of light-heartedness involved in a piece that's otherwise dark and depressing. It also really helps you accomplish the feel of crushed hopes, childhood dreams, and the like, because of the reminder of childhood that songs bring.

    I hope everything gets better for you soon. Truly. I hope writing about the pain is helping too and that you're reunited with true happiness in the near future...well, unless you just happen to be fantastic about writing on subjects that have nothing to do with your current mood, in which case, my concern for your heart's well-being is for naught. peace!
    | Posted on 2013-05-11 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]


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