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    dots Submission Name: To Bedots
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    Author: Esophagus1
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    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This poem is a tribute to Miyamoto Musashi and his work "The Book of Five Rings"


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    dotsTo Bedots
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    To meditate every day.
    To improve ones mind
    and hone ones skill
    through diligent training.

    To continue every exercise in practice
    daily and maintain a warriors mind.

    To be clean,
    and properly dressed
    for a warriors death
    at any moment.

    One dwells upon being
    cut up by swords,
    impaled by spears,
    shot with arrows,
    riddled by rifles,
    being burnt up in a great fire,
    getting thrashed by violent tides,
    being struck by lightning,
    getting swallowed up in an earthquake,
    getting crushed by a landslide,
    and every day WITHOUT FAIL
    one considers themselves as dead.




    Submitted on 2013-05-11 12:14:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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