Description: So its the time of year people are getting accepted to med school. I'm just... slightly freaking out at the thoughts of myself next year. I don't think I can handle it.
Anyways I decided to just do a sort of train of thought. So I just started writing whatever came to mind.
OK I agree with Dustin. Please fix the formatting...For me it got a little confusing with the large spaces and it became hard to read. Other than that I thought it was just fine.
First off fix the formatting, the increased spaces and incorrect characters were obnoxious and made me almost stop reading. The rhyme scheme is solid, nothing special. You could try to expand on each subject with in the piece a little more. Build that tension through the piece not as the piece. It isn't a horrific piece by any standards but I believe you can do a little better. This isn't a piece I'd revisit and rewrite, perhaps learn from it and develop more.