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Whats your reality?

Author: Forgiven
ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
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Whats your reality?

And there I was..

In that moment,
Of my virtual reality.
A painted version
of what I "believe"

What the truths were,
that I made,
Where I put my focus,
and where I was leading my life.

Im not so much on that road anymore
I have veered to not walk on that path.

But right now there is no path,
and the branches keep snagging me..

I can see a clearing.

A lighted place among the trees,
something tranquil...

so I can gather myself
and pull the branches from my clothes
and rid myself of the "debris"

Im better off leaving the "trees" remains here
so I can walk freely
to pick up more branches
along the way.

Ive decided not to walk the "path"
This way may have more obstacles,
but it was a better experience in the end,
and the stories will be amazing.

Submitted on 2013-05-16 14:23:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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