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    dots Submission Name: Junior no longer... A Senior for a yeardots
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    Author: blackdemigod13
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    dotsJunior no longer... A Senior for a yeardots
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    The end of Junior year has finally gotten here,
    I'll soon be a Senior and I shall then leave this place that I hold dear.
    I will now have to make the decisions of who I want to be,
    While in the process trying not to lose the real me.
    I will no longer be able to simply turn and hide,
    I will have to face this new world without my school friends by my side.
    Sure we may see each other now and then,
    And I'm sure we'll all inquire how the other has been.
    But it will not be the same as seeing each other every day,
    For now we must go our separate ways.
    So when the day comes in but a year when our diploma we shall receive,
    I'll silently shed a tear for my child hood that I will leave.
    But do not worry for it is a journey we all must take,
    And with this life we've been given a decision we shall make.
    Whether or not to further our education,
    Or simply go to work at the news station.
    But whatever we choose it will then be that we start to pave who the world will now see,
    And in the end become who we have always been and who we will always be.





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