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    dots Submission Name: Night winedots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 137/243/158
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNight winedots
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    The glass of glass reflects upon its own,
    and merges with its stem in shadow.
    My fingers follow slowly passing time
    into its chilling roundness. The perfect moisture
    swirls around my tongue -
    as moist as air that lingers
    on the lighted walls.




    Submitted on 2013-05-17 10:55:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short but good reminds me how much i like wine on hot days like this...
    | Posted on 2013-06-01 00:00:00 | by concrete_rose | [ Reply to This ]


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