Night wine

Author: expiring_touch ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 139 /256 /171 Words: 44

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Night wine

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The glass of glass reflects upon its own, and merges with its stem in shadow. My fingers follow slowly passing time into its chilling roundness. The perfect moisture swirls around my tongue - as moist as air that lingers on the lighted walls.

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short but good reminds me how much i like wine on hot days like this...

| Posted on 2013-06-01 00:00:00 | by concrete_rose | [ Reply to This ]

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