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    dots Submission Name: Pulling myself updots
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    Author: Forgiven
    ASL Info:    38/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 339/335/100
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPulling myself updots
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    Today I am different

    I know deep inside Im the same.
    But I also know my "tomorrow"
    will be different from my "yesterday".

    Im awake

    and those words stand alone
    because in that instance
    it is solidified in my mind
    and to my person

    Write your facts hands
    live the truths you find in your words
    help me listen to my mind
    as I type the words of thought

    Help my dreams
    be the breath of my virtual reality
    as I paint the pictures
    I want to see.

    Life will be magnificent.
    Not because it was destine,
    but because it was my
    Belief.





    Submitted on 2013-05-17 13:42:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I've found that how you handle things in life is less about what they actually are, and more about how you see and think you can deal with them. Your perspective on the situation defines your reaction to it; your belief in yourself to take whatever comes can be just as important as your actual ability to take whatever comes. You just gotta believe, and you got this. I really liked this piece a lot. Thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2013-05-18 00:00:00 | by TheSnoitart | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree, although there's sometimes little we can do about the actual circumstances we encounter we do have control over our attitudes, the way we face each day. However I would suggest that relative rationality and rational relativity are often two different things. Being schizophrenic I feel I speak with some insight here. Take care!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-05-17 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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