Sometimes time traveling
Can lead to mind exhaustion
Life constantly is unraveling
Answers and more compelling questions.
Though the road is already tough
I can't give in until I had enough
The path is too steep and rough
Yet I breathe and exhale in puffs.
Only to come to an abrupt conclusion
That life is nothing but a rest stop
Is that we get a break, for a minute
But life waits not.
I read this one twice. The first time I didn't see the rhythm and rhyme of it because the syllables weren't being repeated. I read it outloud and caught the rhyme. Perhaps it would be a good idea to break it up a little bit so add to the rhythm.
I like the message though- and it reminded me of my own studies. I'm constantly searching til I can't stand it anymore then it's back to the drawing board after a rest. Very good. :)