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    dots Submission Name: Love to Hatedots
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    Author: ashleyannnn
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Rant/I hate you
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    dotsLove to Hatedots
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    I hate you.
    I hate the way you look at me.
    I hate how much you love me.
    I hate the sound of your voice.
    I hate that I love you.
    I hate feeling stuck.
    I hate you for who you are.
    I hate loving you this much.
    I hate hating myself for hating you.




    Submitted on 2013-05-19 18:08:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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