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    dots Submission Name: A string of thoughtsdots
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    Author: Jessica Lynn
    ASL Info:    22/f/mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 121/119/57
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 663
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1143



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       Top of my head writing. no revisions here. let me know what you think...


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    dotsA string of thoughtsdots
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    Too much coffee.
    Not enough sleep.
    A headache, a heartache,
    a busy schedule to keep.

    We all have our problems,
    we all have our needs.
    Some, they have flowers,
    others, they grow weeds.

    The earth keeps on spinning,
    no matter how we feel.
    In the end we all wonder,
    does it matter what is real?

    Dreaming strange dreams,
    digging up the past.
    Looking to the sky,
    time passing by so fast.

    Where are we going,
    why do we stay silent?
    Who knows of good and evil?
    why it's important to be quiet?

    We are all tired here on earth.
    We all ask of death and life.
    We all wonder the meaning
    behind our meaningless strife.

    what I really want to know
    is why we hold ourselves back,
    from things that make us happy,
    why we play and act
    and lie to ourselves
    as if our lies come true....
    but they won't and you know it,
    what's in your way- is you.




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