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    dots Submission Name: Harrowing Efforts dots
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    Author: Erreur
    ASL Info:    20 / M / Canada
    Elite Ratio:    7.32 - 19/25/14
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Spoof/Comedy
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       This was authored to be analogous to the doggerel musings of this sites Parnassian lexiphanes. I apologize in advance that this work is bereft of a euphonious metrical composition; to avoid being illusory, I veraciously concede the fact that I am unable too pronounce most of these words.


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    Matutinal it occurs, as my vision fades to blurs
    I dissimulate my worries running from ingravescent torture
    Fuddling about to no avail, letting out one last exhale
    I enter the almost-abattoir seizing up in sight of the awaiting horror
    Austerulous, I immure my imaginationís deceptive furor
    It was now time, and nothing more

    Bajulate the bold biting, metal stings are inciting
    The metal eases into my fingertips forming a new rugosity
    I invoke the amandation of my senses, as I defy the urge for apanthropinizations
    Oh the torture ends yet I do not acquiesce the end, remaining gritty
    If only there was veracity in my velleity

    It then restarts with aeipathy, I scream out in tones wreathy
    Fearing the chatter of small teeth yearning my skinís buccellation
    They hope for my slightest twitch, and my smallest flinch,
    My littlest arousal could be met with a close-to-castration
    Little more I could do then beg my salvation

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    Heavens must have heard my plea, as necessary motions are set free,
    All my torture has ended with a brabeum from the brutality
    Now able to be seen, without being overly obscene
    As I Adimpleate the amarulence agonarch of society
    With a zipper pulled up in piety!




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      Is this a serious attempt at poetry, or some sort of overly elitist, sarcastic attempt at mocking the average person on this site?
    | Posted on 2013-06-10 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]
      Being one of this sites lexiphane authors I am pretty upset with the fact that your sesquipedalian words, as spelled, don't appear in my unabridged webster's. Austerulous, bajulate, rugosity, amandation, apanthropinizations, vellity SP: velleity???, aeipathy, wreathy, buccelation, brabeum, admipleate, amarulful, and agnarch apparently aren't english (according to Webster's). I was hoping to have some fun here but am unable to comprehend your meaning. Further, of my pique on the peeved it took a lot of time to look them all up only to find they must be misspelled or neologistic. I'd be interested to know what you thought you said!!

    Frustrated

    PS: I googled these words and found definitions for some of them but apparently many are misspelled. As I understand it you got run through the meat grinder for having your fly down and were happy to escape with your life and your family jewels intact???
    | Posted on 2013-05-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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