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    dots Submission Name: unspoken dots
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    Author: isis_lenore
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    dotsunspoken dots
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    Sometimes I think I can hear the unspoken
    And I want, but I can't say anything meaningful
    The silence of my own tongue is deafening.
    Like a stone skipping across the lake
    my attempts slowly slip into the ripples
    Like they never were.
    Perhaps they never were.




    Submitted on 2013-05-31 21:01:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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