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The season

Author: concrete_rose
ASL Info:    31/f/nc
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this is about someone that i was once friends with and hurt them and acted crazy so now i miss them

The season

This Season

How serious is this season of fate intertwined,
Two souls at once perpetuating a silence condoning,
Lost in each others afflictions, iron-clad are these relations.
How long is this season of hopeless regrets?
When to stare into the final judgment of these lifestyles,
This indulgence that carries no joy to either of us anymore-
At last the time of breaking innocence and realizing the end is near.
Finally a new season and the time is slowly winding,
To the relentless fate that will become us,
Forever friends but never loved ones, only dreams haunt us…
Will there ever be an understanding of either of us?
Will the rise ever shine again, the sun basking upon our necks-?
Two bodies entwining efforts of pure happiness?
Oh how the rain has fallen into this season, the flowers droop by the window,
The clouds no longer are at once parted.
Who is the one that holds or let’s go of sanity?
Are we all at once searching for perfection in another, in each other?
The time has ended and so are the friendship, the love, and back into loneliness with no understandings,
For how long is this season to envelop our lives?

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