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    dots Submission Name: His Best Interestdots

    Author: DearlyDeparted
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 211/290/189
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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       This is the kind of stuff I deal with along with taking care of my seven month old son.

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    dotsHis Best Interestdots

    Sad... is when your child's soul purpose in life is to support your drug habit.
    Horrible is the fact that you leave him in my care for close to a year and make no effort to contribute to helping to pay for his utilities.
    Crazy.. is how you all the sudden want him back now that I'm trying to gain custody so that I may provide a better life for a child that isn't mine.
    Sad + Horrible + Crazy = The bullshit that is my life.

    Submitted on 2013-06-02 22:21:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ahhhh, don't complain, it's unbecoming of your philanthropic nature.

    PS: send this to who you wrote it for. They seem to need it!

    | Posted on 2013-06-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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