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    Author: sbridges
    ASL Info:    33/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 119/119/63
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 725
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    The box meant freedom to her. In that box colors appeared and formed images like a TV. And a future awaited her, to finally show up prepared. But it was no TV, or any kind of figurative symbol. Day 502 in a CA State Pen. and the mid-sized barred window in her cell, was all she had faith in anymore, And today, she saw God. Everyday she had learned to depend on the distant trees, which, like steadfast telephone poles criss-crossing their web over the fields, allowed communication through and to Nature. It was an androgynous face in the middle of a flower in the middle of, and all blue like, the periwinkle sky. Moving with her eyes, and telling her quietly in a musical voice that she had inner strength enough to do this. Dew was moved. Her leathered hand pointed at It, reached for it, and as her finger got closer trying to outline Its face, In a flash! of Time, The image dissipated like a cloud of memories and visions woven together It no longer held Its shape for air is too tenuous and clearly impossible to grasp Right then, Its face became fluid like water She blinked and jumped in surrounded by H2O molecules so sweet and simple by design They encapsulated her and she felt slick, lusciously silky, and dexterous She wiggled and flowed in a new gooey state she felt cushioned by soft sides Dew fell back onto her bed, The circular ripple from where she touched It made Its image larger, with concentric circles still inside Playful, Dew wiped The image with all of her fingers And the sky moved chaotically like a snake in a pristine pond, blurry The image, Everything was restored in a minute




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