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    dots Submission Name: 50 Shades Of Boxing Helena/Box Me dots
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    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1046
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1360



    Description:
       Written 1/9/13
    Lyrics for a song for my new band/music project.


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    dots50 Shades Of Boxing Helena/Box Me dots
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    I give you more than I hold within.
    Serve you more than I can give.
    Fall to the ground when you say sit.
    I will obey.
    I am your pet.

    Tie me down.
    Tie me up.
    Tie me to your fucked up love.
    I won't leave, because I can't get free.
    That's exactley what you want from me.


    Sado-masochistic lover
    You're dominating my brain.
    Have no use for thoughts.
    You only wish to cause me pain.


    Hold me down.
    But don't hold me up.
    In the darkest dungeon of your love.
    You cut my being from it's extremities.
    To fit inside the box you built for me.

    Box me in.
    Box me up.
    Encase me in your fucked up love.
    You know I want it.
    You know I crave.
    To be wrapped up in rope.
    Just to be your slave.


    Sado-Masochistic lover.
    You're dominating my brain.
    Have no use for my thoughts.
    You only wish to cause me pain.


    You only love the innocence of of my pain, my weakness, my ability to behave.
    You are deranged & depraved.
    And I am 50 shades of fucked up.
    Tomorrow I am your prize, tonight I am your slut.




    Submitted on 2013-06-06 20:01:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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