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    dots Submission Name: She's a Demondots
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    Author: Jazzy
    ASL Info:    20/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 90/220/226
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsShe's a Demondots
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    Across your palm, a crystal ball
    Which in the wrong direction points
    Slides through memories
    Sifting away the pain and torment
    Playing a montage of
    Every love
    Every kiss.

    Your heart is trapped
    Lustful for those images
    The past could give you
    What the future wont.

    You could be here with me
    But your mind is caught
    In what yesterday brought.
    You could be lost in tomorrow
    But your heart cant face
    Giving up.

    Your crystal ball pulls you
    Closer, reminding you how
    Beautiful she was
    How she could make your
    Pulse quicken beneath her
    The smell of her hair
    Close to your face
    The way she smiled for you.

    Your mind should tell you
    Shes a demon,
    With a broken heart.




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      and thats the problem with the mind and memories. its so selective, so fickle and totally misleading at the best of times.

    when you should be remembering a balanced history of ups and downs all you can remember are the kisses and the roses and the wonderful moments which is all fine and good but doesnt help you move on or stay rooted in reality.

    crystal balls arent worth putting your whole faith in... there has to be a balance or a stop and review how likely the promises of the crystal ball are...

    and so i read this and i see someone trying to have a relationship with the person stuck in a past ghost of a relationship which has to be harder on the person trying to be in the relationship than the person stuck in the past...

    perhaps what is left hanging in the last stanza is "and the girl right in front of you is worth pursuing..."

    OPEN YOUR EYES ALREADY!! SHES A HEARTBREAKER AND IM MUCH BETTER FOR YOU!! HOW LONG MUST I WAIT UNTIL YOU NOTICE ME!!? UNTIL YOU LOVE ME!!??

    yup.
    good work x
    | Posted on 2013-06-07 00:00:00 | by impossiblyme | [ Reply to This ]


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