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    dots Submission Name: Smiledots
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    Author: DarkGunslinger
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 7/25/23
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 602
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1145



    Description:
       meh. spur of the moment thing. it pretty much sucks.


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    dotsSmiledots
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    In dreams of spreading darkness
    you look up to the sky
    to see your world surrounded
    and fractured by ancient lies

    Angel wings that bend and
    break against the wind
    it's over, old and pointless
    wake up and cry in the darkness

    alone

    So drink to the dead
    share your secrets for awhile
    and when the dawn finally breaks
    you can put on your plastic smile

    A bookshelf full of memories
    and priceless tiny denials
    the pages of your books are blank
    the ink has run out of the vials

    All you see is gilded coal
    A burning tomb to a rushing foal
    the trees that speak will try to guide you
    into the memories that will blind you

    So drink to the dead
    share your secrets for awhile
    and when the dawn finally hits
    you can put on your broken smile

    One day you'll find salvation
    from this muddy, desolate mire
    and when you pull yourself out alive
    then you can finally wear a smile






    Submitted on 2013-06-12 15:10:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I must disagree with your description of it sucks. It is written in a much different voice than most of your writing but it is amazing. It has a beautiful flow to it. I would write a better comment but I have now read it about 6 times and am still just lost in it. I'm not sure why I didn't see this piece when it was posted 3 years ago. Great work, keep writing.
    Sarah
    | Posted on 2016-07-25 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]


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