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    dots Submission Name: Mundanedots
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    Author: MsUnderstood
    ASL Info:    22/ Female/ Stuart, FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.21 - 26/21/22
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMundanedots
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    My mind sits here writhed in pain
    trying to rid myself of mundane

    I force myself to push on through
    but is it right
    or good
    or true?

    is it time to give up
    give in
    let go?

    NO
    I've worked too hard
    too long
    not to know

    is it worth the pain
    to suffer through all the mundane







    Submitted on 2013-06-12 19:35:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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