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    Author: dannythadog
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    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Truth and honesty


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    dotswho i amdots
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    I know im a dog but fuck family or friends il admitt i am a hog i am so skinny if i was part of a tree id be the skinny little twig rather then a log i pretty much from my own mother and sister steal so i can have all i own around me payed for cause it makes my pointless lifefeel sadly some how complete feel real ive never gotten a woman on my own all i can do is rag behind my mates ive all dogged at some point give me the chance to get with there sloppy seconds of a slag but being as ugly as i was gifted with with there is no other possible way my life ever gets lifted




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