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    dots Submission Name: Animals in Visioningdots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Bytes: 190



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    dotsAnimals in Visioningdots
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    animals in visioning
    fox fur lined silver
    this is yours,
    through develop(ing)ed
    endearment
    energy sent, glowing
    is it mine, and received?




    Submitted on 2013-06-23 23:29:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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