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    Author: MmR
    Elite Ratio:    5.45 - 468/442/138
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Misc/Romance
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    A scribble 
    Of romantic nothingness
    Reads better
    In the pale moon's light
    With blurry vision
    Of drunken hope...

    Lucky for you, Sweetheart
    I happen to be an alcoholic
    Who fancies the evening sky.




    Submitted on 2013-07-01 03:16:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like that! Since I'm down on even my scribbles lately I'll take that as being quite friendly. ;) Feedback? If I must, I will say I expected to read "pale moonlight" but there I go being trite again. Tickles? "Lucky for you, Sweetheart". Gotta fav this one.


    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2013-07-02 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Romance you in the light of day some noon rune croon, the thought of such duel!! Moon light is a treacherous and deep ravine, and sunshine is like the mountains of madness. Who will be king? Lets elect the carousel ceaselessly ceremony chaos character charisma. We'll release the amalgamated anathema android and get into an obdurate cognate on the agnate aimed futurity cudgel. Transcendentally existential depths of pervasiveness. So the intrinsic endemic can be indigenously innate aimed inertia. Forgive me I'm a little bit insane in the membrane but enigma entity is to me of embark embargo extradition and euthanasia extortion, we should be telecommunicationally teleportational.

    Bruce

    PS: your correct I'm lucky
    | Posted on 2013-07-01 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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