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fuck my life


Author: gwenn sundala
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fuck my life



i threw my computer.

he said he would always be there for me; he tried to kill himself.

i called for help; instead of helping him, they arrested him.

he promised he would protect me from my past; he hit me exactly the same way my father did.

but i'm the shithead.

i have a disease, that keeps me from being aware of money problems. i can not handle money. he insisted on giving me the money from the tax return. i told him i couldn't be trusted with it, because of my disease. he didn't listen. now we are in debt, and it's all my fault. i'm the shithead, and i am the one who messed up. i deserved what i got.

so i threw my computer.

why should a shithead have nice things?




Submitted on 2013-07-02 12:55:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2013-07-15 00:00:00 | by CNPerry | [ Reply to This ]


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