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    dots Submission Name: fuck my lifedots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
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    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    dotsfuck my lifedots
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    i threw my computer.

    he said he would always be there for me; he tried to kill himself.

    i called for help; instead of helping him, they arrested him.

    he promised he would protect me from my past; he hit me exactly the same way my father did.

    but i'm the shithead.

    i have a disease, that keeps me from being aware of money problems. i can not handle money. he insisted on giving me the money from the tax return. i told him i couldn't be trusted with it, because of my disease. he didn't listen. now we are in debt, and it's all my fault. i'm the shithead, and i am the one who messed up. i deserved what i got.

    so i threw my computer.

    why should a shithead have nice things?




    Submitted on 2013-07-02 12:55:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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