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eleport written by crashley
tuesday's love written by Daniel Barlow
forgetting him, remembering her written by jeniecel
The Truth About CNPerry written by CNPerry
Serenity written by Ramneet
Gwen written by Silenced Hope
Lost written by cyberpoet
Making Light written by annie0888
Punching Dream written by Esophagus1
In This Falling Grace written by Crestfallenman
She's a Demon written by Jazzy
On The Other Side of Pleading written by CNPerry
Mundane written by MsUnderstood
fuck my life written by gwenn sundala
fragile notions written by trinityfinger
Shatter Me written by Crestfallenman
The Tree of Woe written by poetotoe
This Feeling Isn't Going Away written by DearlyDeparted
harbinger2 written by CNPerry
Rebel's Poem written by CNPerry
freida written by trinityfinger
who i am written by dannythadog
More Cooking Tips written by Aerkkion
WASTELAND WARD written by Ethan Brody
A Dancer's Meditation written by expiring_touch
Smile written by DarkGunslinger
I literally took your heart. written by Darkwarrior
Alone written by poetotoe
Jealousy written by loveofpoetry
Yours Truly written by blankscreen
eleport written by crashley
tuesday's love written by Daniel Barlow
forgetting him, remembering her written by jeniecel
The Truth About CNPerry written by CNPerry
Serenity written by Ramneet
Gwen written by Silenced Hope
Lost written by cyberpoet
Making Light written by annie0888
Punching Dream written by Esophagus1
In This Falling Grace written by Crestfallenman
She's a Demon written by Jazzy
On The Other Side of Pleading written by CNPerry
Mundane written by MsUnderstood
fuck my life written by gwenn sundala
fragile notions written by trinityfinger
Shatter Me written by Crestfallenman
The Tree of Woe written by poetotoe
This Feeling Isn't Going Away written by DearlyDeparted
harbinger2 written by CNPerry
Rebel's Poem written by CNPerry
freida written by trinityfinger
who i am written by dannythadog
More Cooking Tips written by Aerkkion
WASTELAND WARD written by Ethan Brody
A Dancer's Meditation written by expiring_touch
Smile written by DarkGunslinger
I literally took your heart. written by Darkwarrior
Alone written by poetotoe
Jealousy ��written by loveofpoetry
Yours Truly written by blankscreen


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eleport written by crashley
tuesday's love written by Daniel Barlow
forgetting him, remembering her written by jeniecel
The Truth About CNPerry written by CNPerry
Serenity written by Ramneet
Gwen written by Silenced Hope
Lost written by cyberpoet
Making Light written by annie0888
Punching Dream written by Esophagus1
In This Falling Grace written by Crestfallenman
She's a Demon written by Jazzy
On The Other Side of Pleading written by CNPerry
Mundane written by MsUnderstood
fuck my life written by gwenn sundala
fragile notions written by trinityfinger
Shatter Me written by Crestfallenman
The Tree of Woe written by poetotoe
This Feeling Isn't Going Away written by DearlyDeparted
harbinger2 written by CNPerry
Rebel's Poem written by CNPerry
freida written by trinityfinger
who i am written by dannythadog
More Cooking Tips written by Aerkkion
WASTELAND WARD written by Ethan Brody
A Dancer's Meditation written by expiring_touch
Smile written by DarkGunslinger
I literally took your heart. written by Darkwarrior
Alone written by poetotoe
Jealousy written by loveofpoetry
Yours Truly written by blankscreen
eleport written by crashley
tuesday's love written by Daniel Barlow
forgetting him, remembering her written by jeniecel
The Truth About CNPerry written by CNPerry
Serenity written by Ramneet
Gwen written by Silenced Hope
Lost written by cyberpoet
Making Light written by annie0888
Punching Dream written by Esophagus1
In This Falling Grace written by Crestfallenman
She's a Demon written by Jazzy
On The Other Side of Pleading written by CNPerry
��Mundane written by MsUnderstood
fuck my life written by gwenn sundala
fragile notions written by trinityfinger
Shatter Me written by Crestfallenman
The Tree of Woe written by poetotoe
This Feeling Isn't Going Away written by DearlyDeparted
harbinger2 written by CNPerry
Rebel's Poem written by CNPerry
freida written by trinityfinger
who i am written by dannythadog
More Cooking Tips written by Aerkkion
WASTELAND WARD written by Ethan Brody
A Dancer's Meditation written by expiring_touch
Smile written by DarkGunslinger
I literally took your heart. written by Darkwarrior
Alone written by poetotoe
Jealousy written by loveofpoetry
Yours Truly written by blankscreen




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| Posted on 2013-07-04 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
  I agree people aren't commenting enough!!!

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