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    dots Submission Name: F Scott Fitzgeralddots
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    Author: Wonderwords
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 15/24/25
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 719
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    Description:
       Just a visit to the cinema to see The Great Gatsby


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    dotsF Scott Fitzgeralddots
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    Between the lines
    The buzz was mad with Baz
    Great Gatsby and all that jazz
    Lighting up the cinema in 3D
    Pulsating music of Jay-Z
    Leonardo looking cool
    Dying in his swimming pool
    I did not want to go
    And say good-bye (au revoir)
    Leaving you alone under a cloudy sky
    With only spires to see you sigh
    And no-one to admire your tender
    Brown eyes or smiling face
    Vision in orange needing space
    To study clinical until really late
    And read between the lines
    How biology and art entwines
    Was Daisy’s decision influenced by DNA?
    They skimmed that point, I hear you say.








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