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    dots Submission Name: Cogentdots

    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092/410/117
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Grievous grace has due yesterday’s blue
    Autonomous avarice enigma entity’s hue
    Identity crisis guidon guile’s due
    Mystic symbiosis’ existential true

    Apostrophe sabbat transcendental kitsch
    Consortium liaison’s libido’s glitch
    Translucent opulence’s lambent’s a bitch
    Metaphysical mystique is black as pitch

    Terrestrial equestrian tellurian terrene
    Adamant tenacity’s obtusely obscene
    Obstinate loquacity spiritually serene
    Maniacally meticulous dexterity’s preen

    Lucid cogent fecund’s maieutic
    Incarnate’s manumissional eidetic
    Spatiotemporal telemetry’s fanatic
    Logistical tactician’s primal ecstatic

    Chicanery dynamism’s opulent fealty
    Intrinsic innate retrospective cruelty
    Indigenous endemic inherent frailty
    Corrupt costume counselor subtlety

    Gambit alluvium aloof impunity
    Immunity is Epicurian absurdity
    Who are we to us credulity
    Nimbus nimiety nihilism’s congruity

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    ||| Comments |||
      After reading a few of your pieces, it seems you have a fascination with diction, and especially with the word "fecund." This one in particular makes me think of Snoop Dogg, if he were a graduate of Oxford. I think I would like it better if I didn't feel like you were just trying to make people's heads spin.
    | Posted on 2014-12-11 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]
      I have no idea what this poem is about.
    If your goal is to confuse the reader with an overly superior vocabulary, then you have succeeded.
    | Posted on 2013-10-14 00:00:00 | by nolram | [ Reply to This ]
      Youve edited this a good bit, havent you?
    It is a bit easier to read this way; even without a dictionary. ;)
    Im reading much of the meaning to be bits of the past, which would seem to make this a little biographical; but, a lot of the bits read as professions of faith/values.
    I will reread and repeat until I understand further, but your editing made the poem much more accessable,
    but I cant claim to have absorbed and properly processed your thoughts.
    Im getting there, though. :)
    | Posted on 2013-07-11 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      This seems quite familiar... but can I put my finger on it?

    | Posted on 2013-07-08 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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