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Will there


Author: isis_lenore
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Words: 41
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A poem that has five lines and creates a mood, picture, or feeling. Lines 1 through 4 are made up of words, phrases or clauses while the first word of each line is in alphabetical order. Line 5 is one sentence long and begins with any letter


Will there



Barely speaking
Calling but no one is answering
Don’t know if there’s anything left to recover
Even though our heart strings are still entangled

Will there ever be more than could have, should have; now it’s long gone?




Submitted on 2013-07-06 14:39:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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