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Submission Name: Will there dots

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Author:	isis_lenore
Elite Ratio:	3.78 - 459/207/102
Words:	41

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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A poem that has five lines and creates a mood, picture, or feeling. Lines 1 through 4 are made up of words, phrases or clauses while the first word of each line is in alphabetical order. Line 5 is one sentence long and begins with any letter

Will there dots

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Barely speaking
Calling but no one is answering
Don’t know if there’s anything left to recover
Even though our heart strings are still entangled

Will there ever be more than could have, should have; now it’s long gone?

Submitted on 2013-07-06 14:39:20 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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