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    dots Submission Name: Will there dots
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    Author: isis_lenore
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 459/207/102
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    A poem that has five lines and creates a mood, picture, or feeling. Lines 1 through 4 are made up of words, phrases or clauses while the first word of each line is in alphabetical order. Line 5 is one sentence long and begins with any letter


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    dotsWill there dots
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    Barely speaking
    Calling but no one is answering
    Don’t know if there’s anything left to recover
    Even though our heart strings are still entangled

    Will there ever be more than could have, should have; now it’s long gone?




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