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    dots Submission Name: Sadism | Rewritedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 294
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
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    dotsSadism | Rewritedots
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    Legs tangled
    breaths heavy
    and her chest heaving
    I can't help but feel
    a tug of satisfaction
    overwhelm my senses

    The heel
    of her foot (shaking)
    traces along my calf
    in attempt to erase
    the searing pain
    that comes with my fingers
    digging into her insides
    and scratching at the flesh
    covering her walls

    Because once I began
    I couldn't relent.

    It's funny how (satisfied)
    as I bend her finger
    with my spare hand
    with my tongue grazing her skin (smoothly)
    and teeth raking at her nerves (harshly)
    she yields to scream (in my left ear)
    and replaces the loud rumbles
    that tumbled out of her throat
    with sighs of defeat
    and relinquish (let go)

    She's given in.

    And I take this advantage and roll my tongue
    down her knuckles
    along her wrist
    so I may twist her arm
    and bite into the flesh
    that once was scarred
    and now is torn apart

    There is more than what meets the eye
    and I take her gaze as an immediate example
    of dire want
    and the desire that followed
    with not a single tear (that hid within my body)
    shed (and ran down the walls of my stomach)
    as my tongue flicked out (urgently)
    to taste what is (what pleased me)
    metallic and bitter (iron)
    cold and lively (winter)
    maybe half like I (someone dead)

    Once words were said to me
    that spoke of a sadist
    and a masochist;
    they mix like religion and church

    So to mix with the body before me
    I became
    what she had pleaded
    and not what
    she had wanted
    for her entire
    life:

    a person (a nothing)
    that hurts her (willing)
    and loves her (faintly)
    at the same time.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Your probably gonna attract rapists....... unless thats what you desire....do you actually think your going to defend your citadel agains't the holocaust thats about to catastrophe.....well maybe, I had to consider my genetics probably express, but it's heinously horrendous by me; on the personal conjecture my man {{get a life}}. The fact that such things make some people happy to me!!

    Monad
    | Posted on 2013-07-10 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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