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Here again...


Author: Themissingshado
ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle
Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32
Words: 65
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Depressed
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just writing what i feel right now...


Here again...



Here again
At the end
of a another broken heart
another lost love
but i fell for you

We dance through the sky
when everything was new
you eyes were so beautiful
like crystalline amber, so blinding
Nature took it's course
now we constantly argue
everything fell down between us
now what am i to do without you.





Submitted on 2013-07-10 00:48:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  first part is fine maybe capitalize stuff idk, but the second part

We dance through the sky (maybe danced?)
when everything was new
you eyes were so beautiful (maybe another word for beautiful)
like crystalline amber, so blinding ( like this line)
Nature took it's course
now we constantly argue ( change constantly to always) ( 2 syllable
everything fell down between us
now what am i to do without you.



I feel your pain friend, my girlfriend told me after 5 years she wants to be alone and doesn't love me anymore, hang in there okay. Life is a real bitch sometimes especially when you think its going well.
| Posted on 2013-07-10 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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