Crumble

Author: Themissingshado ASL Info:    22/male/Seattle Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 23 /52 /32 Words: 65

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Standing still Emptiness A shell of a man My goals shattered Seemingly over It kills deeply So misleading Hate consumes me Just go away No stay here Why do I do this Suffering is all I know Without you Just a vessel Kill the music Hit the lights Fade to black Deafening silence And then Love crumbles away

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I think it is easy to get lost in what others want and not know what you, yourself really want in something or someone. While its easy to get discouraged, perhaps in loss and anger we are able to find beauty again than those who blind themselves to feeling-wanting something. Anyhow, that's what this makes me think of i it s ambivalence. But then again, i try to remain optimistic.

| Posted on 2013-07-13 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]

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