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    Author: trinityfinger
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    quiet homes, versus the reckless anger of youth
    dishevelled and lonely, awake and frightened
    of the latent possibilities invested in dreams

    minutes within hours, corners within circles,
    spinning within the finite stability
    of a random meeting between you

    and i.




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