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    dots Submission Name: Inherentdots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29/50/47
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsInherentdots
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    We're all sad people
    

    
Lonely and mad people
    

    
Not so good, but not so bad people
    

    
Drifting along
    

    
Dropping like a penny from a Skyscraper
    

    
Like nothing but a feather, or words on paper
    

    
Meaningless but for the images they convey




    Submitted on 2013-07-16 01:13:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      During these times, I read this a reflect on what I've been thinking all along. I really like this piece; not only because it conveys a lot of my own beliefs, but also because it's realistic and its dynamics are brilliant. Short and sweet, yet long enough to feed the eye. Thank you for sharing, I liked this a lot.
    | Posted on 2013-07-22 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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