Inherent

Author: Rhythmal Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29 /50 /47 Words: 50

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Inherent

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We're all sad people Lonely and mad people Not so good, but not so bad people Drifting along Dropping like a penny from a Skyscraper Like nothing but a feather, or words on paper Meaningless but for the images they convey

Submitted on 2013-07-16 01:13:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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During these times, I read this a reflect on what I've been thinking all along. I really like this piece; not only because it conveys a lot of my own beliefs, but also because it's realistic and its dynamics are brilliant. Short and sweet, yet long enough to feed the eye. Thank you for sharing, I liked this a lot.

| Posted on 2013-07-22 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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