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Inherent


Author: Rhythmal
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Words: 50
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Inherent



We're all sad people

Lonely and mad people

Not so good, but not so bad people

Drifting along

Dropping like a penny from a Skyscraper

Like nothing but a feather, or words on paper

Meaningless but for the images they convey




Submitted on 2013-07-16 01:13:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  During these times, I read this a reflect on what I've been thinking all along. I really like this piece; not only because it conveys a lot of my own beliefs, but also because it's realistic and its dynamics are brilliant. Short and sweet, yet long enough to feed the eye. Thank you for sharing, I liked this a lot.
| Posted on 2013-07-22 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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